Avene Body Moisturizing Melting Balm for Dry Skin 250ml

Permanently moisturizes: This claim might be a bit too strong. Skin constantly sheds and renews itself, so permanent moisturization isn't achievable. You could rephrase it to: "Provides long-lasting hydration" or "Deeply nourishes for lasting comfort."

Restores skin comfort: This is a good claim, you can keep it as is.

Sensory:

• Creamy texture and soothing scent: Sounds great, keep it!
• Cocoon of softness and comfort: Evokes a nice image, you can keep it.

Benefits:

• • Rich in oil-soothing complex: This is informative, but consider adding what kind of oils are used (e.g. shea butter, jojoba oil) for a more luxurious feel.
  • Suitable for dry, sensitive skin: Great for targeting your audience.
  • Provides a velvety and moist feeling for up to 24 hours: This is a good claim, you can keep it!

Deeply nourishes skin for lasting comfort. Its creamy texture and soothing scent envelop your skin in a cocoon of softness. Rich in a [list of soothing oils] complex, this balm is perfect for dry, sensitive skin. Provides a velvety and moist feeling for up to 24 hours.